Brian's Summary of Susan's Comments on the Submission ----------------------------------------------------- -- Too long -- Focus -- Annotations -- BTA -- Contributions -- wrt. PE (respecialization? intraprocedural?) -- wrt. DC (?) -- More -- Motivation -- Examples -- Definitions -- polyvariant specialization and division -- Explanation -- Nested/overlapping regions -- Respecialization -- Sub-function annotations -- Appendix of annotations -- Syntax -- Concise description -- Should omit -- Tangents -- Digressions into `C, PE vs. DC, off-line vs. on-line, etc. => Discuss each topic only in one place and keep to the point -- Excessive forward references -- Policy details -- Cache replacement policies -- Weaker specialization -- Some implementation details -- Implementation discussion about units/backend (save for another paper) -- Results (save for another paper)